Anyways, after receiving a critique from a friend. I looked over my unfinished draft with a fine comb. From the looks of it, a good number of sections would have to be chucked out. The upside there’s good material for me to work on. About four pages worth or less.
Update, I almost forgot. Those remaining pages would need some work, the fight scene along with others. Just yesterday, I decided make a switch to edit my NaNoWriMo draft, after receiving a critique. While I still have time to get some editing done duringthe remaining days of round one.